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Inspired by the early years of The Beatles...

Post by funsongs » Wed Mar 31, 2021 7:53 pm

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Re: Inspired by the early years of The Beatles...

Post by MBantle » Thu Apr 01, 2021 2:06 pm

Hi funsongs!
I really like the tune. There are noticeable timing issues in the intro and the drums are not really changing/adapting to the lyrics. The vocals also need to sit in a space un-attacked by the rhythm section...so regardless of the genre you probably know that the draft needs a bit more 'love'. My five cents.
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Post by cosmicdolphin » Sun Apr 04, 2021 7:35 am

Luckily Paul McCartney is not dead otherwise he might be turning in his grave :shock:

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Re: Inspired by the early years of The Beatles...

Post by funsongs » Sun Apr 04, 2021 8:42 am

Merryband1 wrote:
Sat Apr 03, 2021 11:05 am
I like it!
Merry
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Post by feaker66 » Sun Apr 04, 2021 4:47 pm

Do I hear a little Santana in there? Fun stuff from the funmaster. Not used to the vocal not down the middle.
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Re: Inspired by the early years of The Beatles...

Post by Merryband1 » Sun Apr 04, 2021 5:32 pm

You're welcome, Peter!

feaker66, the vocals in varying spots aside from in the middle was a fun thing they did back in the 60s. Refer to this fun piece full of inside jokes from the Monkees:

"I'm Gonna Buy Me a Dog"

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Post by funsongs » Sun Apr 04, 2021 9:04 pm

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