Epic Cinematic Hybrid Trailer Instrumental

[johndalenow]

Please refer to the REVISED version above. Thank you.

[Zaychi]

There's something weird rythmically going on with the break around 0:57; the first beat after feels "too early" and makes the violin lead-up break in a very strange plcae (which also starts in a weird bar place, like the 2nd eighth or something? I'd check the bar/count structure there.

Overall, I think the track lacks a low end. The droney synth doesn't do enough there.

[johndalenow]

There's something weird rythmically going on with the break around 0:57; the first beat after feels "too early" and makes the violin lead-up break in a very strange plcae (which also starts in a weird bar place, like the 2nd eighth or something? I'd check the bar/count structure there.

Overall, I think the track lacks a low end. The droney synth doesn't do enough there.

I fixed the violin entrance and rhythm sync difficulty. Also added low end beginning at the 2nd section, still not mixed though.

Give another listen, if you are so inclined.

https://soundcloud.com/john-dale-music/ ... f9e9d36d7c

Thanks,

John

[karafinman]

Hi. Nice work. I find the orchestra hit very grating to my ears--not a good, convincing sample. When the violins enter it is very nice. The choir voices are not up to par with what's out there. I think it's fixable.