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No Listing - Country Rock feedback please

Post by DBarnett » Tue Feb 01, 2022 8:59 pm

Hi,
There is no listing for this one, just something I've been working on
I'm trying to get a Dierks Bentley 5-1-5-0 sound but I'm about a country mile off :lol:
Your feedback is much appreciated, amigos
Thanks!

Ok, here's the revised version, let me what needs attention :D

Third revision:

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Re: No Listing - Country Rock feedback please

Post by cassmcentee » Wed Feb 02, 2022 4:45 am

I would start by turning the reverb off and tightening up the groove, seems way too loose
Is the bass player in the next County?!? :P :D
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Re: No Listing - Country Rock feedback please

Post by VanderBoegh » Wed Feb 02, 2022 11:12 am

Hey Dave! Great to bump in to you again. Hope you're doing good, my friend!!

I think the spirit and composition is in the right place, but the production is where the issue is. This thing is swimming in so much reverb it might as well be a shark searching for food in Reverb Sea (my analogies need work, lol). Most modern country sounds pretty tight and in-your-face to me, though I haven't studied the genre too closely as I don't work in it. Just try to emulate the reverb situation of what you hear on the radio. I think you'll find that there's hardly a drop of reverb to be found anywhere. Maybe a short room or plate or something, but definitely nothing like what you've got here.

It also sounds pretty boomy. Maybe roll off a bunch of low end from those tom hits and get them sounding tighter and not like they're being hit from the back of an empty stadium.

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Re: No Listing - Country Rock feedback please

Post by DBarnett » Wed Feb 02, 2022 11:42 am

VanderBoegh wrote:
Wed Feb 02, 2022 11:12 am
Hey Dave! Great to bump in to you again. Hope you're doing good, my friend!!

I think the spirit and composition is in the right place, but the production is where the issue is. This thing is swimming in so much reverb it might as well be a shark searching for food in Reverb Sea (my analogies need work, lol). Most modern country sounds pretty tight and in-your-face to me, though I haven't studied the genre too closely as I don't work in it. Just try to emulate the reverb situation of what you hear on the radio. I think you'll find that there's hardly a drop of reverb to be found anywhere. Maybe a short room or plate or something, but definitely nothing like what you've got here.

It also sounds pretty boomy. Maybe roll off a bunch of low end from those tom hits and get them sounding tighter and not like they're being hit from the back of an empty stadium.

~~Matt
Hi Matt! Great to hear from you my friend :D
You and Cass seem to be on the same page with advice here, I so appreciate it
I started out trying to get the drums sounding big and live and went a little overboard
I'll break out the hair dryer and work on these points
Thanks again!

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Post by funsongs » Wed Feb 02, 2022 6:46 pm

"I like a lotta reverb - you know: that Caveman sound
Like to hear a lotta echo - if you know what I mean
I like to crank it up when no one's around
So I bounce it off the walls and make a scene..." - Old Guys Like Rock
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Re: No Listing - Country Rock feedback please

Post by DBarnett » Thu Feb 03, 2022 1:37 pm

The new link to the revision is back at the top :D
Let me know
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Post by VanderBoegh » Thu Feb 03, 2022 6:09 pm

Mix is MUCH better in this version, Dave. I caught a few moments of rhythm issues - a drum fill around :26, and the rhythm guitar in that section at :50.

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Re: No Listing - Country Rock feedback please

Post by DBarnett » Thu Feb 03, 2022 6:14 pm

VanderBoegh wrote:
Thu Feb 03, 2022 6:09 pm
Mix is MUCH better in this version, Dave. I caught a few moments of rhythm issues - a drum fill around :26, and the rhythm guitar in that section at :50.

~~Matt
Alright Matt! Yeah, I was kind of hearing something, thanks for pointing those times out :D I'm on it
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Re: No Listing - Country Rock feedback please

Post by funsongs » Thu Feb 03, 2022 6:20 pm

Liking the improvements from The Peanut Gallery.
You've already got competent 'overlords' involved...
so I'm sittin' on the sidelines here, looking forward to the final.
:? :P
Liking the 'overalls' vibe. :D
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Re: No Listing - Country Rock feedback please

Post by DBarnett » Fri Feb 04, 2022 4:22 am

Hi Matt, Peter, Cass and anyone listening
Here is the 3rd revision, up top
There's always room for improvement :D
Thanks!

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