i must be crazy...canceled

[feaker66]

took this track down...not y best

[myk247365]

The shaky, reserved nature of the vocal will limit where this song can be placed.

Maybe "11 45 she’s watchin tv" could be "11 45 she’s watchin sixties reruns" so the rhyming scheme doesn't get confused, and it will give "no more tv" more power because you don't use "tv" twice.

Nice moody track, you should consider shopping around an instrumental of it.

Hope this helps.

Michael

[feaker66]

The shaky, reserved nature of the vocal will limit where this song can be placed.

Maybe "11 45 she’s watchin tv" could be "11 45 she’s watchin sixties reruns" so the rhyming scheme doesn't get confused, and it will give "no more tv" more power because you don't use "tv" twice.

Nice moody track, you should consider shopping around an instrumental of it.


Hi Michael Nice to meet you. My voice was way off on this one in that my allergies had taken over. No excuse, that is easy to resing. The song really needs a special singer to pull it off. I have a higher voice and have to force the low notes. I am 73 and have to force EVERYTHING. HA HA

I like the change in the lyrics you suggested. "watchin tv" is lame 60's reruns works or gunsmoke...ha ha I don't put enough thought into my lyrics.
Usually when no one replies, the song is a mutt. I make so many that I get that. I should take a month on one for a change. Got another one started already. Sorry for not getting back to you. Traveling from south Texas to upper Michigan was a two day tough hall. First day 1,135 miles and 17 hours behind the wheel. Great to be back to my regular studio and more STUFF Thanks again





Hope this helps.

Michael