New Song Looking For Feedback

[JJacob]

Hey I am New to Taxi and would like to get some feedback on a country song i wrote for a Male . It is called When the night is thru
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[myk247365]

This track has a bit of a MIDI/loop feel. If MIDI or loops are used, look into recreating them and double the length. Record eight bars of a 4 bar loop to get more "human feel" in the backing instruments. Your bridge at 1:46 creates a good contrast. Look into how you could create a similar amount of contrast between your verse and chorus, and find a way to set apart the refrain "when the night is through". Maybe use the rhythmic phrase that ends the piece to do this as it's not used elsewhere in the track.

Hope this helps.


Michael