# S220629NC Listing & Review - "leave room for a songwriter"

[magicjuani]

Hello there,

There was this # S220629NC listing that requested "distinct sections that could easily inspired ideas for Top-Liners".

When I got my submission returned, it indeed indicated to revisit it by "leaving more room for a songwriter to write melodies" on.

Congrats btw on the forwarded songs which I gave a listen to via the Forward blog: brilliant! I wish the producers and writers all the best with their tracks and make a huge K-Pop BANG on the charts!
“Across the Water ” – James Keeley
“Lucid Dreams” – POWERS

Were the more stripped-down verses the key to their forward compared to the busy and ear-candy filled choruses?
My WAV form looked like theirs though !

[Casey H]

Hi
If you'd like opinions from us here, you need to post the entire listing text and a link to the song(s) submitted.

Best,
Casey

[magicjuani]

Hi
If you'd like opinions from us here, you need to post the entire listing text and a link to the song(s) submitted.

Best,
Casey

Oopsie, thanks for letting me know Casey.

I can definitely post the listing text but I don't have a link for the song.

Should I post in another thread to get advice as a rule of thumb for my question?

[Casey H]

Hi
If you'd like opinions from us here, you need to post the entire listing text and a link to the song(s) submitted.

Best,
Casey

Oopsie, thanks for letting me know Casey.

I can definitely post the listing text but I don't have a link for the song.

Should I post in another thread to get advice as a rule of thumb for my question?

Yes, you would post in the peer to peer section of the forum. Include the listing text, link to song, and your question of course. If you don't have a link to the song, you can use a free Soundcloud account or similar to create a link. Links to a song on your Taxi page can also be shared but some people have trouble getting that to work.

HTH
Best,
Casey