Fantasy Instro Critiques (and Title Suggestions)

[bmoBauhaus]

Seeking some critiques on mix and mastering as well as composition. Also, I'm not sure of what to title it. Would love to hear thoughts of what this piece makes y'all think of. Thank you!

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Here is the listing:
LOTS of FANTASY, ORCHESTRAL, INSTRUMENTAL CUES are needed by a globally distributed Music Licensing Company that's represented in over 75 countries and has a lot of success landing TONS of Major Network placements every year!

NOTE: We previously ran this request as Dispatch Listing #D230522TS, but the Company is looking for more material, so they asked us to try again. If you submitted to listing #D230522TS, please send different material this time around.

This Company is looking for excellent Instrumental Cues that could be heard on a playlist with the following references:

"Pinocchio Main Title" by Alan Silvestri

"Polyjuice Potion" by John Williams & Alexandre Desplat

"Only The Beginning Of The Adventure" by Harry Gregson-Williams

Please submit well-composed Fantasy Orchestral Instrumental Cues that can take listeners on a wonder-filled journey. Your submissions should have engaging motifs, sweeping arrangements, and top-notch Orchestral instrumentation that falls in the general wheelhouse of the references (and others like them). Craft your Cues around a central motif, and layer instrumentation in and out as they progress to create a sense of dynamics, forward momentum, and interest. Your productions should be polished, and any virtual Orchestral instruments you use need to be of high quality and very realistic-sounding. If you have tracks that could sound at home in a Fantasy movie, send them in!

Your submissions should be about 90 seconds to 2 minutes long, give or take. Non-faded, buttoned/stinger endings will work best. Do NOT copy the referenced material in any way, shape, or form. Use it only as a general guide for tempo, tone, and overall vibe. Do NOT submit any material with unauthorized samples of any other artists’ music, sounds, or any other form of media. Broadcast Quality is needed.

[DouglasKnight]

A very nice piece, in my humble opinion! Not my area of expertise at all -- but great use of dynamics to build interest. I'd call it "Journey to Dreamland"

[bmoBauhaus]

Thanks, I updated and remixed

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