It's definitely much better with this vocalist. I think he sounds a bit youthful for a cocktail lounge singer thing which is what I think would be best. It's also OK but probably not strong enough for a higher bar listing. It could be the mixing-- reverb, doubling, FX, etc. However, I think reaching out to hire vocalists was a good move for you. With the deadline looming, there wasn't much time to audition/listen to samples of a few vocalists. Is this a BIAB backing track? (Calm down, Mark

I assume that's Sharon on harmonies. My ears suck, grain of salt, but I think her harmonies need vocal tuning. They seem off to me. Do you do any tuning such as with Melodyne?
BTW, if you shorten this and remove the vocal, it might work as pure instrumental for a library. Maybe someone hear would help with the mix as a collaborator.
I applaud the choice of this unique approach to the cover. It's not likely to get forwarded here with all that's been said. One big negative is it's a very busy piece. Always remember the intended use of everything we do is under dialog in a scene.
PS If it's BIAB, what style is it? I'd like to try it.
