Thanks, your feedback helped us get this song signed!

[funsongs]

UPDATED mix 3/2/2024 .. Hopefully the distortion and phaseyness that Peter, cosmicdolphin and WSAO thought was too much is within tolerances now, but the bizarre feel is still in tack. What do you think?

https://s.disco.ac/cmlamdsptfbt

Thank You!

PS It's ironic that the lyrics have the words 'distorting' and 'out of phase' and the main complaints were too much distortion and vocal phaseyness

Well - I've got the JBL 305 monitors 'up', and to these old-guy ears: this is far better. Not sure if it's even a word but it's LISTENABLE - and not annoying to the ears.
Now you've got a viable product, IMHO. The lyrics can be heard, not R-U-N-N-O-F-T (run-over) by the FX - which still are in 'prosody' with the words you're singing.
Good job, fun track, good luck.
HTH.
Your Fuzzy Mileage May Vary.

[deantaylor]

Peter: thanks for the re-listen. Glad the remix works for you!

[deantaylor]

Big thanks for your time and great feedback on this song. The remix we did per your comments was accepted by the first publisher we submitted it to. Yay!

[Casey H]

Big thanks for your time and great feedback on this song. The remix we did per your comments was accepted by the first publisher we submitted it to. Yay!

Congrats to you and Marc! It has a cool motion, action, driving vibe.

Best of luck!
Casey

[cosmicdolphin]

Big thanks for your time and great feedback on this song. The remix we did per your comments was accepted by the first publisher we submitted it to. Yay!

Cool ! Well done on getting it into shape and out in the market