Vintage 60's Motown - Mix

[WSAO]

Hi folks,
Could you please help me to decide which mix should I send (if I should:) to this listing?
https://www.taxi.com/industry#listing-S240326WT

I did 2 mixes one is normal and the other more vintage.

Normal:
https://www.taxi.com/members/WJQg0yIBTr ... n---normal

60's mix:
https://www.taxi.com/members/WJQg0yIBTr ... n-60-s-mix

Thanks!

[Casey H]

Hi Andre
Sorry to be the bearer of bad news but the song doesn't even come close to sounding Motown, it sounds more regular 60s pop. And it's not a strong song there either, not having a chorus or even a good central hook. So it's not at all a candidate for this listing. It could be the start of a 60s pop song, probably by keeping the verse and bridge but getting a catchy chorus in there.

Best,
Casey

[gitanosoy]

To Casey: For a second there I thought I had submitted to this when I saw my name.

[Casey H]

To Casey: For a second there I thought I had submitted to this when I saw my name.

It wasn't obvious that "WSAO" is an abbreviation for "Andre"?

[WSAO]

Hi Andre
Sorry to be the bearer of bad news but the song doesn't even come close to sounding Motown, it sounds more regular 60s pop. And it's not a strong song there either, not having a chorus or even a good central hook. So it's not at all a candidate for this listing. It could be the start of a 60s pop song, probably by keeping the verse and bridge but getting a catchy chorus in there.

Best,
Casey

I agree Casey, it doesn't have a strong chorus nor matches the Motown's vibe.
I'll pass it.
Thanks!