Alternative Folk - reworked per your feedback 5-22-24

[eeoo]

Yeah this is working to my ear, nice work! I'm getting a bit of a Handsome Family vibe as well.

[WSAO]

agree with eeoo.
Less general reverb, also try to clean some noises, maybe in the vocal track.
Anyway is a very cool song!

Thanks WSAO. Marc reworked the production/mix.
If you have time to listen again your thoughts on the new version would be much appreciated. If not, no worries, you've helped enough already!
Is it hitting on all cylinders now? Is it ready to pitch to libraries for sync?
https://on.soundcloud.com/T9HxkWnbayoHCDfWA

Hi mate,
General instrumental is better and clear, but there's something with the vocals that still not quite right.
Is all right for the mood of the song, but maybe you should play with compression, EQ and reverb to get a clear vocal. Your voice is good by the way!

[BradleyHagen]

This bass sounds too much like what you'd hear from the local cover band at a dive bar. Good sound, but too amateur in tone for a song this cool.
~~Matt

I take offense at that comment .......kind sir!!!! lol