Feedback on New Age/Meditation track

[bmoBauhaus]

Hey I took my first stab at this genre. Open to any comments. Thanks!

My track:
https://www.taxi.com/members/N5SOUeh_Qe ... stial-bath

The brief:
Lots of MEDITATION/NEW AGE INSTRUMENTALS are needed by a well-established Los Angeles-based production house/library with a long track record of tv, film, and advertising placements.

This Company is searching for relaxing Instrumentals that could be found on a playlist with the following examples:

"Deep Healing Sleep" by Meditation Relax Music

"Yoga Music" by Buddha's Lounge

"Relaxing Spa Music" by Body Mind Zone

Please submit well-composed Meditation/New Age Instrumentals that evoke relaxing, tranquil, and peaceful vibes. This Company is looking for tracks that are suitable for spas, yoga, meditation, healing, sleep, skygazing, Zen, etc. Your submissions should have soothing organic sounds, ambient electronic-based sounds, or a tasteful blend of both. Your arrangements can range from "drone-like" to some subtle melodic movement – just be sure to keep the mood calm, meditative, and very serene. Please be sure your productions and any virtual sounds or samples you use are high-quality and current-sounding.

TAXI Tip: This Company is looking for Instrumentals that put listeners in a trance-like state and help them relax completely. All your elements should flow easily and cohesively with nothing sticking out in an attention-grabbing way. The goal is to evoke a relaxed state without drawing attention to the music or production itself!