Two Men In Love

[irwin]

This is an upgraded version of my song I first posted here before. hoping to get some feedback on the song over all(Tell me has it is, no hard feelings). Thank you.
My original lyric, Suno AI music & vocals
https://www.boomplay.com/songs/170107330?from=artists

[XrashGates]

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[cosmicdolphin]

Why " Two Men "...why not just " Two People "...then it's much more universal

[XrashGates]

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[Casey H]

This is really good. Nice job.

Not sure what your goal is for the song. For sync, the subject matter might make the field of opportunities too narrow. It would be awesome for the right scene, but how many scenes could it apply to? Not sure if you want to write a version with alternate lyrics such as "People in Love" or similar. You'd have to re-write a lot of the verse lyrics as well. It's really catchy so it's something to think about.

Who performed on it and produced it? If anyone worked on the track who is not a co-writer, make sure you get signed work-for-hire agreements from them.

Good luck!
Casey

[irthlingz]

My original lyric, Suno AI music & vocals

You'll need to check whether the AI works for whoever you're submitting it to. "AI Alert" (i.e.no AI accepted) occurs 29 times in the current listings.

That still leaves a lot of listings that aren't saying that, though!

Michael

[irwin]

I could see this in some Star Trek Discovery eposide

or on a LGBT radio/TV program

Send it out to them and see how it goes

Thanks for the information, lead. I will gave them a try. I appreciate you listen to my song.

Irwin

[Casey H]

My original lyric, Suno AI music & vocals

You'll need to check whether the AI works for whoever you're submitting it to. "AI Alert" (i.e.no AI accepted) occurs 29 times in the current listings.

That still leaves a lot of listings that aren't saying that, though!

Michael

I missed that part in your original post, Irwin, that this was all AI generated. That's a big problem for pitching this anywhere. As Michael said, many libraries who list specifically say no AI tracks. And even the ones that don't say this up front are very likely to not accept. Also, I'm not sure what the laws say now about owning a copyright on something AI generated. It might all still be up in the air. Not owning the copyright is a show-stopper.

As much as I really like this, it may be impossible to market it commercially.

Casey

[irwin]

I'm not sure what the laws say now about owning a copyright on something AI generated. It might all still be up in the air. Not owning the copyright is a show-stopper.

As much as I really like this, it may be impossible to market it commercially.

Casey
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Casey, what I understand this far about the law copyrighting an AI generated song is that one can file and copyright ones lyrics of the generated song with the copyright office, and recreate the melody or melodies.

[Casey H]

Casey, what I understand this far about the law copyrighting an AI generated song is that one can file and copyright ones lyrics of the generated song with the copyright office, and recreate the melody or melodies.

Right. I wasn't sure if these were your original lyrics or AI generated. If you wrote these lyrics, they are yours.