EDM - Middle Eastern

[zydeceltico]

Hi Ya'll,

This is way outside my comfort zone as I usually write acoustic singer/songwriter but I had a middle eastern library so I thought "why not?" lol

I just submitted it to a Dispatch listing.

Now I'm wondering what others with more-better ears than me might think.

I'd love some feedback.

Thanks,

Tim

ps. well....I was going to but dragging and dropping mp3 or wav both sent me an invalid file type error. What filetype works here now? it's been a few years. Thanks.

[cosmicdolphin]

ps. well....I was going to but dragging and dropping mp3 or wav both sent me an invalid file type error. What filetype works here now? it's been a few years. Thanks.

You need to post a link to it, you can't attach it to the forum post. SoundCloud is easiest.

[zydeceltico]

I figured it out. Here ya go.
https://soundcloud.com/timbrogdon/yataharak

[davidr]

My suggestion is to skip the long intro ... You could include a short intro, by starting at time 00:42.
Also, the music after time 2:21 sounds good -- but it seems to be very different than the music before time 2:21.