Newbie wanting feeback on Hip Hop cinematic Instrumental Cues

[d7guitar]

Hi everyone. I joined Taxi 3 months ago .
So far i am very much enjoying the process of writing for TV/film. I have much to learn and new skills to develop.
I am listening to podcasts and watching YouTube to "catch up" and further my knowledge.
I have submitted 5 Cues and actually had one FORWARD. So exciting!!!
I am hoping to get some feedback from the community on two new Cues for a "Hip Hop cinematic Cue" listing D241124ER.

I truly welcome your feedback.

https://www.taxi.com/my/artist/songs/AY ... rumental-2

https://www.taxi.com/my/artist/songs/Bf ... strumental

[douglasricketts]

Hi John, I'm getting the dreaded "404 error" when clicking the links. Make sure your profile is public and make sure your tracks are also marked public.

[telefunkin]

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