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[ronnie35]

Hi Can anyone listen to this cue it is an attempt to write a light tension cue . It is not a listing I am just trying writ and build my catalog. It is called HOLD FAST ON MY soundcloud http://www.soundcloud.com/777rd
kind regards, Ron /ronnie35

[telefunkin]

No, not really. The link doesn't work.

[ronnie35]

Hi Telefunkin, So the cue is not a light tension or are you unable to get into my soundcloud?
Ron

[ronnie35]

Hello again
I forgot to add some important info so you all could activate my soundcloud, my soundcloud name
Ron

[RealPickle]

Hello again
I forgot to add some important info so you all could activate my soundcloud, my soundcloud name
Ron

That's not the issue. The link now takes us to your general soundcloud page. I can see that Hold Fast is the first track, but going forward it'd be better to link to that song specifically. Take all the guesswork out of it for people.
This is the link you should use:
https://soundcloud.com/777rd/hold-fast? ... al_sharing

Having said that I did listen. You're definitely on the right track. That little middle section is fine for adding edit points but it's a bit too long and too silent. All the momentum dies out of the track. Also there's absolutely no low end that I can hear. I understand for light tension you may not want that big pulsing bass but you want something on the low end. Without it it sounds anemic, and also it has a bit of a cheeky, almost humorous vibe at the end right now, and some low sounds might mitigate that.

[ronnie35]

THANKS
WILL DO
RON

[ronnie35]

Hey Geoff so something like a low drone I already have a low pulse
Ron