listen please

[ronnie35]

Here is the listing TAXI # S250509NE My composition is called HESTITATION IS IT TO BUSY? Lots of NEO-CLASSICAL DRAMEDY INSTRUMENTALS and/or INSTRUMENTAL CUES are needed by a top-notch EXCLUSIVE International Music Licensing Company that has a GREAT track record of sync placements! QUOTING THE COMPANY: "We're searching for playful, quirky, and sophisticated neoclassical compositions that blend light orchestration with comedic undertones. Tracks should feature expressive string arrangements, plucky pizzicato patterns, and lively woodwinds, creating a sense of mischief and whimsy. The music should feel elegant yet fun, with dynamic builds and pauses that enhance comedic timing." it is on my soundcloud http://www.soundcloud.com/777rd
Thanks, Ron

[macomposer]

Hi Ron,

It would say that it is NOT too busy... But nothing about it says Neo-Classical to me. It just sounds like a regular dramedy piece. Also, the opening gesture with the tremelos is too loud and jarring, and doesn't sound like it the same orchestra as the rest of the piece. Gotta find a way to blend it in more. It sounds like it's a loop, so that might be why it's sticking out so much. Finally, there's something about the mix that's not working for me. I can't put my finger on it though. Might be the reverb... might be the samples.... It's just not quite gelling to me, but i could be wrong.

The composition is good, and is on it's way to being a good track. I'd say you're more than halfway there.

Keep working,
Mark

[ronnie35]

Thanks Mark I know that violin trill hurts my ears I noticed in the references the instruments seemed spread out
Ron