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INVESTIGATIVE CRIME INSTRUMENTALS

Post by mteezykeys » Wed Jul 30, 2025 5:21 pm

Hey guys I'm giving investigative crime instros another shot. 1 new composition and 2 revisions from previous returns that were "close".
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Post by RealPickle » Thu Jul 31, 2025 7:36 am

Hey man, I think you're on the right track with these. My only concern would be the part of the brief where it says "The pacing of your pieces should feel deliberate and investigative, not overly dramatic or cinematic"

To me, these stray into the "cinematic" a bit too much at times. The big cinematic drums and swells etc. Not sure which of these is new, which are revisions, and what you've changed, so if you had the big drums and sweeps/swells before and they weren't mentioned you can disregard, but that's the biggest thing that jumped out to me.
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Re: INVESTIGATIVE CRIME INSTRUMENTALS

Post by mteezykeys » Thu Jul 31, 2025 9:36 am

RealPickle wrote:
Thu Jul 31, 2025 7:36 am

To me, these stray into the "cinematic" a bit too much at times. The big cinematic drums and swells etc. Not sure which of these is new, which are revisions, and what you've changed, so if you had the big drums and sweeps/swells before and they weren't mentioned you can disregard, but that's the biggest thing that jumped out to me.
Wow, nice catch, thanks for listening and the feedback.

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