Feedback Request

[jessevargasmusic]

Hello. I am working on a cover of the song "If You Leave" by OMD for the listing below. I would love some feedback on the arrangement. I do plan to re-record the vocal with a stronger and more emotional performance.
But outside of that, is there anything sticking out that feels like it's working against the song? Or is there an element that is missing? Would love some thoughts!

[https://on.soundcloud.com/qRFegkLjZWwGzlsTDG]

Please submit Cover Songs that reinterpret beloved '80s classics in fresh and "syncable" ways! Your Cover versions should stay true to the core lyrical and melodic essence of the originals, while bringing something new to the material, whether that’s through exploring a new style (a cinematic arrangement, a stripped-down acoustic approach, a moody, modern style, etc.) or bringing a more contemporary sound and production, while staying true to the spirit of the original. Due to the wide-ranging nature of the request, instrumentation may vary according to your chosen style or Song. Please make sure that any virtual instruments or samples you use are high-quality and not dated-sounding. Confident, bold Male or Female Vocals are essential to making these reinterpretations yours!

[telefunkin]

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[jessevargasmusic]

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