Re: Please take a listen...

geo · Post by **geo** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:25 pm

Hi, ho Geo here, hey Terry, real interesting track, the production is nice, only a couple of points. I don't think the drums fit the piece, makes it feel almost DJ'd, like they are mixed in. I think for an instrumental listing (if that's your goal) you might want something that doesn't depart from the overall feel as much and you know I was going to say the clock ticking didn't fit with the title, but it does, time ticking away, six feet under, so only the one point, good stuff... Geo

lsp · Post by **lsp** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 2:47 pm

Terry,You really have the whole Six Feet Under Feeling down. Very nice work. I know you were looking for contrast in the mid-section. While it is very cool, the feel and theme seemed to stray enough from the main theme that it made section sound a little disconnected from that theme. Having said that, I can also hear its use in a scene that would call for such a contrast. Good Luck!Ed

johnhampt · Post by **johnhampt** » Tue Sep 18, 2007 3:11 pm

Not familiar with Six Feet under but nice track.

terrydaun · Post by **terrydaun** » Wed Sep 19, 2007 4:41 am

Great! Thank you for the replies. I think it's something I can live with.