Re: Request Critique Song "One Day"

[pitterpatter]

Same comments as for the other songs. Nice tune. The vocals come across as off key. If you pay for a demo, they will use professional vocalists and add background music. This is a nice effort so far though. I wouldn't pay for an expensive demo though because you may want to re-do some of it. Hearing an inexpensive demo of your song might help you to see what needs to be changed.