Re-sing, any better?

[heinsite]

hi guys and gals,had this resung to try to make it more "pop/rock/today"only good comments welcome--LOL--fat chance...it's the car commercial--but the vocal version again....thanks, oh, ps, will have a new tune ready in a day or two of one you guys thought had some promise, marty is finishing the mix, and a totally new one in about a week....all the best,warrenhttp://www.taximusic.com/download/196078/Let_s ... e.mp3Let's DriveVerse 1Only so much sun todayJump on in let's drive awayYou know there's not much out there freeI stare into your eyesThey steal blue from the skyWithout your touch I'm lost, I'm lostChorusRoads we travel might be gravelDon't forget it's you and ISometimes our best plans unravelBut we still get byYeah let's take that driveLet's driveVerse 2Take a drive with meGotta feel this warm eveningRoll your window down and we'll fly, we'll flyNo fear let's feel the blissWe can sneak a real kissAnd I know you'll let me try--I'll tryChorus x2Outro VerseTake a drive with meGotta feel this warm eveningRoll your window down...