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short tune born from a spousal fight

Post by feaker » Fri Oct 03, 2008 8:11 am

Avoiding more harsh words. I thought giving it a little time might help. I wrote this abbreviated song to get my point across to her avoiding a nose-to-nose confrontation. I hope it works.Don't know how to post it direct. You will have to go to my site.It is called "spat".Paulhttp://www.taxi.com/feaker

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Re: short tune born from a spousal fight

Post by billg » Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:06 am

Wow, that's short & to the point allright. Did it work?

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Re: short tune born from a spousal fight

Post by zoom » Fri Oct 03, 2008 9:59 am

The song cuts right to the core, doesn't it? But I think I'm more interested in the story than the song at this point.... good luck dude!

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Re: short tune born from a spousal fight

Post by heinsite » Fri Oct 03, 2008 1:16 pm

hey pablo, i was just getting into your growl, and it was over! LOL.i see this (like always, you "know" heinsite pretty well by now...) being developed into a full fledged tune. great start, great growls and i hear an honesty that can transcend into a cool tune here...sorry!!!! LOLwarren

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Re: short tune born from a spousal fight

Post by byllsong » Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:15 pm

Did your wife like it?
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Re: short tune born from a spousal fight

Post by feaker » Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:33 pm

Bill, Zoom, Billy, WarrenI started this little ditty and didn't know what to do with it, so I made a lil spoof out of it.Hope it made you smile. Quickies are not always bad.Wifey and I (almost 40 years) have never argued:)Thanks for listeningFriendpaul

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Re: short tune born from a spousal fight

Post by flood » Fri Oct 03, 2008 3:21 pm

Hehe, that was a fun, but short, ride.Part of the vocal reminded me of Alice Cooper for some reason. I could hear him wailing that out in concert while holding a blood soaked rubber chicken by the neck.Fun stuff, that little ditty.

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Post by heinsite » Sat Oct 04, 2008 3:12 am

paul--never argued??? geeze, that's almost creepy...LOL!wh

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Post by cameron » Sat Oct 04, 2008 4:37 am

Cool song Paul! I agree it does have an Alice Cooper feel to it.Not sure if you knew that the song cuts out at about :38 seconds. Nothing but dead air and then comes back in after 4 minutes or so. I only know because I left it running while I typed this message.I never heard my parents even argue--not once in the 30 years before my Mom passed away-- and I assumed that was what married life was like. Boy was I wrong... at least in my case. After three marriages I finally found peace with a most awesome person and we've never even come close to a cross word. You're very lucky to have found that person first time out. Actually, I would have too if I'd been paying attention. That's the impetus behind my song "Cold Feet".Cameron

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Re: short tune born from a spousal fight

Post by feaker » Sat Oct 04, 2008 6:01 am

FloodCouldn't get me drunk enough to bite a head off of anything.WarrenWe have always liked each other. Injecting humor into any possible trouble situation has worked for me. Each year gets better.Did the snare drums. Thought that went pretty well:)CamThe song was supposed to die quickly. Could not figure out what to do with it. I called it "choppy E minor". (so creative)I found out this morning that I had pasted some tracks way off to the right thinking I might reapeat them. Will go back and reinstall the right one.All that is important is you have someone now. Good to hear form you guys, I am in a lil funk for new material.Paul

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