Some feedback please

[diogenes]

Great song. I love the production and the unique vibe of this. A couple things that stick out to me are 1) the Vocal, which is a great performance, might be a little to wet, if your using a hall or room of some sort try switching to a plate reverb, that way you get a quick onset without the long decay and 2) I think I'd pick it up at the second chorus, to me it all sound like it has sort of a half-time feel, so at that point I'd pick it up and go double time (I don't think thats the right terminology, but hopefully you'll get the gist. I think it just needs a little build and release, and you'll have a real first class song. Great Job by the way.