TAXI # S160704S5

[wendylanders]

I follow the need for more reverb, but right now I'm making it worse when I try it. The reverb just swallows the song whole.

I've got to tweek it some more before reposting. Right now it sounds worse.

Me & Reverb don't get along yet.

Best,

Wendy Landers

[wendylanders]

Final verdit from the screener,

"Visceral emotional phrasing tends to be a more relied upon lyrical approach by the powers at be within film/tv. The idea is that emotional phrasing will allow the song to loosely support film/tv scenes. Lastly, the overall melodic style isn't quite in the range of the refs above, leaning folkier perhaps. "

I'm following the part where I paint too many word pictures, but can you really err in the other direction and use too few words over and over?

Overall, the critique was better than I was expecting, so I'm happy today. I appreciate everyone's help.

Best,

Wendy Landers