Thanks to screener #19 for an inspiring return!

[MSteinmann]

We got returns for a singer/songwriter label listing, but are all the more motivated because of the friendly and objective critique we got. We'll try to follow your suggestions to structure our songs in a more radio-friendly manner (bring in the chorus earlier) and create more contrast between verse and chorus. And also to put more feeling into the vocals - I realize we were so concentrated on trying to sing on key that that suffered a bit ...

So thanks very much for helping us improve!

Best,
Maya and Sergio (Jade Lagoon)