To screener #79, a belated thank you

[singer1]

I would like say thank you to screener # 79 for giving some awesome critiques of my work "Don't Go Away". At first I reacted with emotion negatively to the comments that were provided me. I had not realized that this person was giving me some great advice, with ways to correct my oversights; to make my song, and others like it, much better.
I can only hope that screener # 79 sees this post, as well as my last to see the realization take effect! Also thanks to my fellow Taxians for pointing out that I just need to tell the story; don't try to be too cute!
Thanks all. D.B.
... the only race we're in, is the human race... D.B.
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