Unseen Song Feedback

[Andi]

Hi there,
here's a song I wrote a few months ago but finished just last week. I would be very interested if you like it or not. And what things are good and bad about the song/songwriting.
Thank you in advance! I also would be interested if the bass frequencies are translating well to your sound systems.
https://soundcloud.com/user-723778850/unseen