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Two Men In Love
Posted: Fri Aug 09, 2024 7:06 pm
by irwin
This is an upgraded version of my song I first posted here before. hoping to get some feedback on the song over all(Tell me has it is, no hard feelings). Thank you.
My original lyric, Suno AI music & vocals
https://www.boomplay.com/songs/170107330?from=artists
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:05 am
by XrashGates
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Re: Two Men In Love
Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2024 9:02 am
by cosmicdolphin
Why " Two Men "...why not just " Two People "...then it's much more universal
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Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2024 10:10 am
by XrashGates
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Re: Two Men In Love
Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2024 11:42 am
by Casey H
This is really good. Nice job.
Not sure what your goal is for the song. For sync, the subject matter might make the field of opportunities too narrow. It would be awesome for the right scene, but how many scenes could it apply to? Not sure if you want to write a version with alternate lyrics such as "People in Love" or similar. You'd have to re-write a lot of the verse lyrics as well. It's really catchy so it's something to think about.
Who performed on it and produced it? If anyone worked on the track who is not a co-writer, make sure you get signed work-for-hire agreements from them.
Good luck!

Casey
Re: Two Men In Love
Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2024 6:14 pm
by irthlingz
irwin wrote: ↑Fri Aug 09, 2024 7:06 pm
My original lyric, Suno AI music & vocals
You'll need to check whether the AI works for whoever you're submitting it to.
"AI Alert" (i.e.no AI accepted) occurs 29 times in the current listings.
That still leaves a lot of listings that aren't saying that, though!
Michael
Re: Woke but Slick
Posted: Wed Aug 14, 2024 10:47 pm
by irwin
XrashGates wrote: ↑Wed Aug 14, 2024 8:05 am
I could see this in some Star Trek Discovery eposide
or on a LGBT radio/TV program
Send it out to them and see how it goes
Thanks for the information, lead. I will gave them a try. I appreciate you listen to my song.
Irwin
Re: Two Men In Love
Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2024 4:14 am
by Casey H
irthlingz wrote: ↑Wed Aug 14, 2024 6:14 pm
irwin wrote: ↑Fri Aug 09, 2024 7:06 pm
My original lyric, Suno AI music & vocals
You'll need to check whether the AI works for whoever you're submitting it to.
"AI Alert" (i.e.no AI accepted) occurs 29 times in the current listings.
That still leaves a lot of listings that aren't saying that, though!
Michael
I missed that part in your original post, Irwin, that this was all AI generated. That's a big problem for pitching this anywhere. As Michael said, many libraries who list specifically say no AI tracks. And even the ones that don't say this up front are very likely to not accept. Also, I'm not sure what the laws say now about owning a copyright on something AI generated. It might all still be up in the air. Not owning the copyright is a show-stopper.
As much as I really like this, it may be impossible to market it commercially.
Casey
Re: Two Men In Love
Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2024 6:14 am
by irwin
I'm not sure what the laws say now about owning a copyright on something AI generated. It might all still be up in the air. Not owning the copyright is a show-stopper.
As much as I really like this, it may be impossible to market it commercially.
Casey
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Casey, what I understand this far about the law copyrighting an AI generated song is that one can file and copyright ones lyrics of the generated song with the copyright office, and recreate the melody or melodies.
Re: Two Men In Love
Posted: Thu Aug 15, 2024 6:22 am
by Casey H
irwin wrote: ↑Thu Aug 15, 2024 6:14 am
Casey, what I understand this far about the law copyrighting an AI generated song is that one can file and copyright ones lyrics of the generated song with the copyright office, and recreate the melody or melodies.
Right. I wasn't sure if these were your original lyrics or AI generated. If you wrote these lyrics, they are yours.