Whaddaya Think?

[dada]

I posted on new tune of mine on my Soundclick Site called "Part of Me"... I wrote the lyrics with the passing of my father in mind 3 years ago... I'm pretty happy with the tune in general, but have worn out my ears on it and would appreciate any thoughts on it from anyone willing to take a listen...http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... hanks,Dave

[superflux]

It may just be a stylistic thing - and I have to admit ignorance in this style - but it sounds to me like some of the note choices you're making in the melody of the verses doesn't mesh with the instrumental accompaniment.The playing and production sound great.Steve

[dada]

Superflux,Thanks for the listen... I think in the beginning verse I am little flat on some notes and the timing may be a tad questionable which throws you one way or another... Myself after listening over and over starting picking this up.. I found at low volumes, if you can't hear the bass notes contrast against the melody line, it defintiely sounds worse...It is a little strange melody too, which is where my patience left off at the moment..Good ear and thanks for the listen..Dave