would like a feedback

[margajee]

Hello!
I would like some review on this song of mine, Baby, baby, which is the first one in my myspace player.

http://www.myspace.com/margajee

thanks
marga

[glender]

You have a nice voice, and the vibe is good. Sorry It didn't draw me in enough to want to read the lyrics nor could I pick them out on the first past. It's the kind of tune that usually ends up in 7th position on an album. It's not what I would call a "break out single" sounds more like a filler.

Over all I think you have talent, I just want to hear it attached to the right song. I'd like to hear this one straight up with just an acoustic piano and very little echo to see if it really has legs.

Your image is screaming some sort of Euro Metal, this sounds like a change up song on a rock album. (That's a guess)

BTW - smoking is bad for you, especially if your the lead singer. hee hee

gl

[orest]

Are you going to submit this to a specific listing, or are you just looking for general constructive critique?

I agree, your voice is lovely, but you need a better mic that fits with your voice. A high-pass filter mic, The T and S and too strong and annoying now, maybe a good de-esser as well.

The song could work as a backing track, but I really don't know if there's a listing here at TAXI for this type of song.

[margajee]

Thanks guys, both of you.
I just wanted a general feedback and the song is actually bound to be a "sentimental" filling in my album, not a leading one... when I played it live usually girls end up with tears in their eyes and boys start yawning!!!!!! ::))

I joined taxi mainly because I want to connect with musicians since I feel quite musically lonely sometimes down here in India, writing songs, and recording them and arrangin them at the best of what i have got...
Baby baby was recorded live, only a second track was added after. I did the mixing myself on GB at home afterwards...

as long as my looks are concerned, i have a double soul... not really rock though...

if you want to listen more get to the next song Hey woman... Women love it, again men can get snoring hihihi

love and light
marga

[margajee]

Hey Orest
my backvocalist, Halima Liedholm, is from Stockolm, we're planning to have some gigs there next summer.
i will take some time to listen to ur music.

<3

[orest]

How nice!
Maybe I can come and see you live if you play in Göteborg. I might be able to visit Stockholm as well.

[margajee]

Let's see!! she is arranging everything there!!! will let u know.
i go to bed now, it is 2 am in India.

goodnite

[ottlukk]

Marga:
I listened to both "Baby Baby" and "Hey Woman". First of all you have a very haunting and beuatiful voice, very memorable & unique. I enjoyed both songs, but I think "HeyWoman" is the more commercial of the two. It really starts to pick up around the three minute mark; in fact it quite rocks! You might consider cutting the the first three minutes in half, so one gets to the last two minutes faster.
Loved the cigar on your MySpace page!
Ott

[margajee]

Well, this came to me just after my morning coffee, quite a nice way to start the day, thank you very much!!!!

I'll shorten the song, it sounds like a good idea...

Lots of love
marga