LOL! No jokes about you being off!AlanHall wrote: ↑Tue Nov 10, 2020 2:58 pmIf I were to get "less constant arpeggio motion" as a critique, my first guess would be the screener means to stop playing an unending pattern of notes; give the music some phrasing, space for the music to 'breathe', a little pause here and there. Honestly, I didn't get that listening to your piece, so I could be off a bit.
No jokes about me being "off" a bit, please!![]()

I should have included the little piano cue and listing to which I submitted and that might help you understand the screener's comment. Here's a link to it:
https://soundcloud.com/kristen-knight-m ... 4kkrBeTRsN
I submitted to listing https://www.taxi.com/listings/S201008PN - "Please submit original Piano-based Instrumental Cues that have a positive, inspiring vibe and feel. Your arrangements can be simpler, Piano-only Cues, or you can add more instrumentation to create fuller productions – just be sure that Piano is the focal point." Screener also remarked that it needed to be simple and sparse. I didn't think this one was overly complicated, but maybe?
Thanks again - really appreciate the insight!
~Kristen