A favorite line from your own lyrics

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by jeffob » Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:09 pm

Hey tuskaiae.. Love that lyric.. Where can I see the whole thing??

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Post by jeffob » Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:11 pm

Let your hair drape accross youclose your eyes and give inthis is not my apartmentbaby its love were in

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Post by jeffob » Sat Mar 03, 2007 12:12 pm

Love it!! where can I see the complete song??

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Post by brennanhester » Sat Mar 03, 2007 4:50 pm

Oh! I forgot:Someday we'll both get away from this allMaybe a trip to the raceway this fallWe'll drink in the bleachers and hope for a crashWhat more could we wish forWe're only white trash(okay, it's a whole chorus)From my "White Trash Waltz", of course.P.S. The song is on my Broadjam site, but not appropriate for the easily offended or the hyper -politically-correct...or kids...

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by grandmatarkin » Sun Mar 11, 2007 2:31 am

Mine's from a lovey dovey song that I wrote for my lady...And the nights, in their passingShow me time, everlastingHas a place set aside just for twoIf you would so obligeHey it won me points with her!

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by jeffe » Sun Mar 18, 2007 11:45 pm

My favourites change on a regular basis, but here's something from one of my recent songs that I quite like:And in every deed there is an unopened seedthat is waiting on the rains of fate.When you walk away. The seed begins to grow,and it turns all that love into hate.
It's been said that I have Murderous eyes.

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by jchitty » Mon Mar 19, 2007 3:36 am

Quote:My favourites change on a regular basis, but here's something from one of my recent songs that I quite like:And in every deed there is an unopened seedthat is waiting on the rains of fate.When you walk away. The seed begins to grow,and it turns all that love into hate.The 'eyes' have it! Good lyrics, Jeffe. I like the first line, 'and in every deed there is an unopened seed.'

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Post by sgs4u » Mon Mar 19, 2007 6:19 am

I'm diggin this right now:Don't hold your breath, if you're trying to soothe my sorrowIt'll still be there tomorrow Deep inside of me, makes me crazyJust keep on talking, and I'll be right here listeningIn one ear and out the otherEventually, I surrender

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by jeffe » Mon Mar 19, 2007 7:45 am

OK. I've got my lyric sheets out now so I'm going to stream off some favourite parts, with the titles of the songs. They are all recorded, but not all online.First one (or second on this thread). A bit or a romantic one.So don't say you're going to love me forever.Because it's not right.Just hold me in your arms while you feel that way.Tonight.Because forever is a very long time.Make a start by loving me now.And if you're still in love with me tomorrow.I'll be happy for another night.----------------"Forever"
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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by jeffe » Mon Mar 19, 2007 7:47 am

Another one.When the tears come down your face.I'll be there to wipe them dry.'Cause I'm gonna stick with you.I will hold you tighter still.When other heroes would run away.I'm gonna stay with you.Yeah I'm gonna stay with you.---------------------"When I grow"
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