A favorite line from your own lyrics

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by jeffe » Tue Mar 20, 2007 12:58 am

Quote:Quote:"It's like rain on your wedding day. A free ride when you've already paid" - "Alanis morissette"Oh it goes so much deeper than that.One of my fave records. I'm a Glen Ballard fan... - jeffe what a lovely avatar! It's my baby girl.
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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by hitwriter » Tue Mar 20, 2007 9:53 am

From "Life In The Big Honky Tonk"copyright William Kitchens and Randy K. Brown."Every bug light in the trailer park came on" "Even though he didn't ask her to marry him on Montel Williams or Riki Lake like she always dreamed about... well she was gonna say yes anyway"

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by jchitty » Tue Mar 20, 2007 10:32 am

Quote:From "Life In The Big Honky Tonk"copyright William Kitchens and Randy K. Brown."Every bug light in the trailer park came on" "Even though he didn't ask her to marry him on Montel Williams or Riki Lake like she always dreamed about... well she was gonna say yes anyway" "Every bug light in the trailer park came on."Good vivid imagery...I can feel summertime in the trailer park in that one.

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by jeffe » Tue Mar 20, 2007 1:47 pm

Quote:Quote:It's my baby girl. So you must be a proud dad!She's really cute! I hope you send her to school of music! She want's to be a drummer. She's not having a drum kit in my house!It can go in her mothers house. Lol.She can sing in tune but has no power yet. I'm working out how to teach her in a subtle way.If this thread is still going in several years, I might get her to post some of her own lyrics.
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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by nomiyah » Tue Mar 20, 2007 7:46 pm

Quote:If this thread is still going in several years, I might get her to post some of her own lyrics.What are you waiting for? I wrote my first song when I was 8 years old!!!!! It didn't rhyme much but when I was 9 I wrote:Night time Daddy-Long-LegsTuck your son in bedOne leg smooth the blanketOne leg pat the headOne leg shut the windowOne turn up the heatOne leg turn the light offIt's time to go to sleepEight legs walking down the hallSsssh! To bed, one and all. Some forum members know this: I wrote a song when I was 13 that I still earn royalties from. Not that you have to pressure her, but don't put a number on what she can do at what age (except dating- then get out the shotgun)...Nomi

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by squidlips » Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:00 pm

Quote:Quote:nice, reminds me of MerleThanks, Steve. Merle is one of my big influences. I love the alt-country stuff. It's sad to see that Merle, J. Cash, etc....all of those greats just don't get played in Nashville that much anymore, although Johnny Cash had a video out recently. So now, what was mainstream is too gritty. Even though Cash died years ago, they took some old footage and used it for the new video....I believe it's called, "Sooner Or Later God Will Cut You Down." Lots of stars did cameos in the video like Johnny Depp. Maybe you've seen it.Hey chits!Ray Price, Haggard and Willie were jes here on the coast. Lovely. Ray's still got an amazing voice. Willie's still talk-singin'.

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by squidlips » Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:07 pm

Quote:Hmmm.......pre-cancer:I’m walkin’ the straight and narrowI’m stayin’ between the linesSo what if my life don’t fit meI only know half the time.I got this thing so down, babyDon’t you tell me this ain’t rightSo what if my soul is itchin’I got it all locked up tightSo perfectly frozen, there’s no crack in the ice(Good Intentions)During cancer surgery:This calls for some drastic measuresPerform a little surgerySome part of me is not trustworthySteel cure’s a necessityIronic how this turns out, baby,My life or femininity.My choices will make or break meEither way, I guess I’ll be free.You can go ahead and move onThere ain’t nothin’ here to see(Good Intentions)After cancer:You think I don’t walk the right roadI know what you say ‘bout meSo easy to cast enough stones,You’d hit me eventuallyYeah, maybe I could use some changesIt crosses my mind sometimesI’d get after it if onlyI wasn’t so damn tired.You better watch what you wish forThere’s no tellin’ what come byOkay, okay. WAY too many lines. Sorry about that. I couldn't figure out which ones I liked.

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by Casey H » Wed Aug 22, 2007 12:17 pm

Hey Squid...A favorite LINE?? LOL... I know you 'fessed up... But I think you crossed the "line" regarding "line"... (But anyone who recalls "Tuning My Guitar" by Melanie is OK in my book)... Casey

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by squidlips » Wed Aug 22, 2007 2:55 pm

Gee, thanks Casey! Anyway, really sorry about that. If it had an edit button, I woulda reduced that sucka in a split second. Jes a bad week fo' me, I guess.

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Re: A favorite line from your own lyrics

Post by geo » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:25 pm

The rose stands proud, it’s fragrant beauty true,Resplendent in its glory, yet envious of you."The Rose (envious of you) para mi esposa Geo

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