Already sent song in without strings

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Already sent song in without strings

Post by ronnie35 » Sun Mar 16, 2014 11:17 am

Hi ,As the post states I've already sent in the song to a solo sad paino listing . The date has passed but I have received so many comments from soundcloud and one from a taxi member TO add some strings. Shoul;d I keep the strings do they add an emotional intensity to the piece? ;)

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Re: Already sent song in without strings

Post by HectorRContreras » Sun Mar 16, 2014 6:29 pm

Dear Ronnie,

What a refine and elegant Music Composition. The Piano almost ... cries, it expresses, with great sobriety, the emotion of sadness.

Next, I am always for Strings, probably because I love Classical Music.

Ok; think Concerto or Preludes or Ballades or Sonatas. A tall order, I know.

Precisely, it is just a question of work. At present the Strings are un- eased, at times. They sound not ... very good. But I like their presence.
So, work at this, yes, find a new Sound for the Strings, and listen and listen again till you find their rightful presence.

No doubt it will be difficult because the Piece is so pure.

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Post by ronnie35 » Sun Mar 16, 2014 7:02 pm

Oh thank you so much for the wonderful advice
Ron :)
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Post by cassmcentee » Sun Mar 16, 2014 8:49 pm

Really Nice Piece Ron!
Love it!

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Post by Geir » Mon Mar 17, 2014 6:12 am

It's absolutely beautiful - serene. I loved it. The strings definitely belong there.

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Post by ronnie35 » Mon Mar 17, 2014 7:11 am

Thank u to everyone I know there's got to be a place for it .

Happy St Patrick Day! :D
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