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by ronnie35 » Sun Mar 16, 2014 11:17 am
Hi ,As the post states I've already sent in the song to a solo sad paino listing . The date has passed but I have received so many comments from soundcloud and one from a taxi member TO add some strings. Shoul;d I keep the strings do they add an emotional intensity to the piece?
THANKS, Ron
the song is called For Always
www.soundcloud.com/schultz-and-carruthers
Chopin: "Simplicity is the highest goal, achievable when you have overcome all difficulties. After one has played a vast quantity of notes and more notes, it is simplicity that emerges as the crowning reward of art."
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by HectorRContreras » Sun Mar 16, 2014 6:29 pm
Dear Ronnie,
What a refine and elegant Music Composition. The Piano almost ... cries, it expresses, with great sobriety, the emotion of sadness.
Next, I am always for Strings, probably because I love Classical Music.
Ok; think Concerto or Preludes or Ballades or Sonatas. A tall order, I know.
Precisely, it is just a question of work. At present the Strings are un- eased, at times. They sound not ... very good. But I like their presence.
So, work at this, yes, find a new Sound for the Strings, and listen and listen again till you find their rightful presence.
No doubt it will be difficult because the Piece is so pure.
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by ronnie35 » Sun Mar 16, 2014 7:02 pm
Oh thank you so much for the wonderful advice
Ron

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by cassmcentee » Sun Mar 16, 2014 8:49 pm
Really Nice Piece Ron!
Love it!
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by Geir » Mon Mar 17, 2014 6:12 am
It's absolutely beautiful - serene. I loved it. The strings definitely belong there.
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by ronnie35 » Mon Mar 17, 2014 7:11 am
Thank u to everyone I know there's got to be a place for it .
Happy St Patrick Day!
Ron
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