Thank you Kit..I am definitely going to play around with this..I am taking everyone's advice! I actually recorded it in 1985..no idea what for..I used to play it live, solo back then..I found the recording on my 4 track..GuitarKit wrote:Nice version Linda and really nicely delivered. they way you have presented it really works. I'm thinking it needs something like a B.V in the chorus or something. the reason being, that you kept the same strum throughout, so there needs to some sort of contrast to bring the chorus out a bit more. Or on the other hand, you could reduce the guitar to whole notes at some point for the contrast.
For me, the little quick licks are not necessary. they are not really in character to the rest of the piece. Maybe reduce the lick to 8th notes or play a double stop pattern?? Just my opinion for what it is worth. I certainly think you have a shot on this one.
Linda