Apocalyptic song- Due Wed, err... Thursday

[burpo]

Here it is, my last-minute quickie!

https://soundcloud.com/burpo/kiss-it-all-goodbye

[burpo]

It's due Thursday. Duh.

[SteveBaruah]

Hi Burpo,

Yes, this works for me. Although I agree, the 'Don't bother' line gets a little repetative, maybe throw in a 'Forget about the..'.

Regards,
Steve

[burpo]

Awesome.

Thanks for the ears, Steve!

-b

[burpo]

UPDATE:

Just got my return. "This lyrics aren't close enough for this scene."

Oh, well! : )

[WeWillWriteUaSong]

UPDATE:

Just got my return. "This lyrics aren't close enough for this scene."

Oh, well! : )

I got a similar return. They loved the vocals and track. Said lyrics didn't fit scene.

[burpo]

Is it on your TAXI page?

I'd love to hear it!

-b

[WeWillWriteUaSong]

Is it on your TAXI page?

I'd love to hear it!

-b

Yes it is b. It's called When The End Meets Tomorrow. I know someone else got a return for lyrics also. Very weird when the listing asked for very specific lyrics.

[burpo]

Great track!

Very Bruno Mars.

I'd really be interested in hearing what was forwarded.

[Cwadroon]

Is it on your TAXI page?

I'd love to hear it!

-b

Yes it is b. It's called When The End Meets Tomorrow. I know someone else got a return for lyrics also. Very weird when the listing asked for very specific lyrics.

Yeah me too! .. my song was called "End of Times" a song full of apocalyptic verbage written specifically for the listing.... but "lyrics won't work for this scene" I thought we new everything the screeners did?