Atlantic Avenue (Rock) **Update**

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Thanks Vince... Originally the first verse was ...Bobby met Jodi in Asbury Park, They had lived there all their lives,No surprise come that Christmas day,When he ask her if she would be his wife.But I saw the look, on Mamacita's face, When they returned from the honeymoon said they’re moving away.Seduced by the neon burning down the Jersey Shore, Cegado por las luces hay peligro mi amor.I was going for a "Jack and Dianne" tale of destroyed love but didn't like how the verses fit together... when I rewrote I just couldn't bring myself to drop the line... even though it doesn't make as much sense now...I am going for a hybrid feel here... grungy chorus with a more island feel on the verses... right now it's two guitars... one darker... maybe I'll adjust the balance...I'll also lay in the previous vocal to see if it works better...Thanks... good points as always....Peace, Geo

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Apr 5, 2009, 5:02am, feaker wrote:Geo budYa know what is so cool about this. You keep ammending your song as the help comments roll in. These folks are so good at seeing these areas for improvemnet. The best part is that I know you don't have an ego. Fun thing to watch.PaulGood to see you back on the boards friend...Oh... I have an ego.... just also recognise my weak points... lotta help here and it's always appreciated...On that note remixed with a little more high end on the drums....Thanks again everyone...Peace, Geo