Country/Pop FWD - but room for improvement

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I would say your production was really so so...however..your song is really great, no wonder it got forewarded. You got great lyrics, great timing, great chord changes and voicing. Im new here but the Taxi guys are spot on for spotting this lil gem...good work! I've listened to alot of other songs and gawd they were awful, what were people thinking? On the other had, wow...I like this song alot. Truely, with the right production this song could definetly climb up the charts and desevers some air play! Of course this is all in my not so humble opinion.

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ok...this song has great potential...there are some areas ...lyrics..that could be better...but the song, tune, melody, pharsing...is excellent. Also, some of the lyrics are crazy good....just for the record...pun intended.

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well, I'll tell you this... A local radio station hosts 'unplugged' mini-concerts on air throughout the year as major artists come through town... and this song would kick ass over at least half of the songs they put on their yearly CD! Okay, that may have been long-winded way to say -- you've got a winner here.... and everyone knows it.I would say don't worry about the screener and just forward this until it gets picked up.... which should be soon! Looking forward to seeing your post in the Success Stories forum!