Feedback wanted for pop/rock song

[Yajhil]

Thanks!

[deantaylor]

Nice! I really enjoyed that. Good songwriting, good lyrics, good melody, good structure. Bridge is cool! No nits. Keep going with it.

[eeoo]

Love it! I'm getting a Devo vibe from this one. You have great instincts, keep it up!

[WSAO]

I like the vocal vibe.
The guitar is very basic and sounds a bit dissonant, but somehow worked for the song
The best option is to team up with a good guitar player then we have way more possibilities to produce more songs.
Keep rocking!

[Yajhil]

Nice! I really enjoyed that. Good songwriting, good lyrics, good melody, good structure. Bridge is cool! No nits. Keep going with it.

Thank you lots! Greatly appreciate it!

Love it! I'm getting a Devo vibe from this one. You have great instincts, keep it up!

Ah Devo! Would've never guessed that but I like Devo so I will take it and run lol. Thanks!

I like the vocal vibe.
The guitar is very basic and sounds a bit dissonant, but somehow worked for the song
The best option is to team up with a good guitar player then we have way more possibilities to produce more songs.
Keep rocking!

Thanks! Yeah my goal is to work with others because doing everything on my own is draining my brain lol. I'm doing the best I can with what I got though. Thank you!