Feedback wanted for pop/rock song
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Feedback wanted for pop/rock song
Thanks!
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Re: Feedback wanted for pop/rock song
Nice! I really enjoyed that. Good songwriting, good lyrics, good melody, good structure. Bridge is cool! No nits. Keep going with it.
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Love it! I'm getting a Devo vibe from this one. You have great instincts, keep it up!
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Re: Feedback wanted for pop/rock song
I like the vocal vibe.
The guitar is very basic and sounds a bit dissonant, but somehow worked for the song
The best option is to team up with a good guitar player then we have way more possibilities to produce more songs.
Keep rocking!
The guitar is very basic and sounds a bit dissonant, but somehow worked for the song
The best option is to team up with a good guitar player then we have way more possibilities to produce more songs.
Keep rocking!
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Original rock song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwMfPcPtTpQ
Cover:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KNsIgYBqfXc
Instrumental:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RR4PbgEy46k
Cinema:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PzGNxH2VGdw
Original rock song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uwMfPcPtTpQ
Cover:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KNsIgYBqfXc
Instrumental:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RR4PbgEy46k
Cinema:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PzGNxH2VGdw
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Re: Feedback wanted for pop/rock song
Thank you lots! Greatly appreciate it!deantaylor wrote: ↑Fri May 24, 2024 1:45 amNice! I really enjoyed that. Good songwriting, good lyrics, good melody, good structure. Bridge is cool! No nits. Keep going with it.
Ah Devo! Would've never guessed that but I like Devo so I will take it and run lol. Thanks!
Thanks! Yeah my goal is to work with others because doing everything on my own is draining my brain lol. I'm doing the best I can with what I got though. Thank you!
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