First posting Swag Bag

[Mellow D]

Thanks Glender, Ken, Mark for your feedback.

Glender I have attached the rough lyrics (still taking shape for second verse) on the initial post

Mark I totally agree it is very rough and the guitars and vocals are out of tune, I'll get that addressed.

With regard to the intro I'll mull over that on as I want to get a bit of build up before the vocal.

Again Thank you.

Mellow D

[feaker66]

Hi

This is a wild fun ride man.

Really liked all of this.

That high vox harmony is way off in the verse, not in the chorus.

Love that guitar riff.

Production tweaking next, and I think you have something going on.

Good luck

paul

[Mellow D]

Many thanks Paul, I'm re recording vocal soon then mixing so finger crossed....