I would love feedback on these lyrics before the demo

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Re: I would love feedback on these lyrics before the demo

Post by JannieM » Mon Apr 20, 2020 12:13 pm

Lyrics appear to be more like Country. So If you are into a Country song, [highlight]"Let’s all pray together that God will heal our land"[/highlight] is appropriate, since many Country songs mention God (or Lord).

Nice work. Looks like you are on the right track.

Jan
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