I just wrote a possible third verse to this song. I highlighted it in green. Any thoughts/suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks.
Steve (aka, simonSays)
(3rd Verse)simonsays wrote:Hi All,
This struck me as I lay in bed this morning.Had to rush for paper and pen to get it down. (Punctuation is only included ... to show how I heard it in my head. I don't do music myself.
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Album: Tales of Love
Song: "Love Struck Us"
Copyright Steve Simon 2013
(1st Verse)
1 Some times in our lives -- rate so great
2 we'll always remember -- That place, That date
3 it's our magic moment frozen in mind
4 a kiss ... so sublime ... it stopped time
(Chorus)
1 Love Struck Us
2 so Unexpected
3 Love Struck Us
4 like lightning connected
5 Love Struck Us
6 and we -- you and me
7 we're no longer two
8 Love Struck Us
9 and just like 'the Sun' -- we fused
10 Love Struck Us
11 Love Struck Us
12 and that wonderous night -- turned into Noon
13 Yeah, that wonderous night
14 turned into ... our first Honeymoon
(2nd Verse)
1 Now when we walk hand in hand -- across that sand
2 it feels like sparks ... charge our wedding bands
3 like an electric river -- our love flows
4 I wonder ... can everyone ... see us glow?
(Repeat Chorus)
1 That night our lives changed -- in A heartbeat
2 we went from heartbreak sour -- to heartthrob sweet
3 I'm just so happy that we finally hooked-up
4 beside you ... is the only place ... I want to be Love
(Repeat Chorus)