New Song -- Your critiques please!

[putter232000]

Hello all! I just finished this and am requesting your input.http://broadjam.com/player/player.php?p ... hanks!Andy

[mistydawn]

This has to be direct from Nashville I had a perma smile, and my face kind of glazed over in a dreamy state listening to your voice So smooth, so...perfect! It seems so effortless for you, I'm JEALOUS!Reminded me of Kenny Chesney, Jimmy Buffet and Randy Travis all in one The song, in its complete perfectness, drew my attention to the repeat of your title.Maybe a little too much? But if you cut some out...would it still flow????I don't know, I was mesmerized either way

[wrdsnmuzik]

very nice, very nice. the nits are tiny: 1) the words in the first verse run a little fast-n-thick, altho you (or the vocalist) handle them nimbly2) the acoustic guitar solo . . as much as I love acoustic guitar . . sounds wrong for this track, this country vibe. the electric solo sounds better to my ears. if you had the technology, you could probably cut the acoustic solo entirely and the electric's length should suffice---having both in there felt a little long. but these are, as I say, really small points. well done, son.

[questor]

Really great vocals....Nice Job..

[aldicicco]

Hi Andy,Great tune, idea, performance and mix! It immediately felt familiar and kept me engaged throughout.It's an irreversible fact that this song is very, very good.I'm eager to hear what the experts have to say...Best wishes,Al

[slowdance]

Andy, good....good songI also think the acoustic lead in.........needs more polishing.Vocals are dead on...............my only thought on the vocals :were you using a good pre amp? They sounded a tad lacking that clarity that country songs are going with these days.........I think you should be able to push this one up the ladder........well doneregards,Dick

[jay10music]

ANDY.....Sorry can't stream broadjam anymore....Jay..

[feaker]

AndyYour voice is awesome man.I wasn't going to say anything beacuse I am not talented, but I agree with Misty on the repeat.Very very nicePaul

[putter232000]

Thank you all for contributing your ears and comments, and to those who have yet to, THANK YOU in advance!I played with the repeat and decided to leave it be, the acoustic solo imho gives a slight dreamlike/laid back feel, and the incredible vocals were by the incomparable Ron Wallace. Andy

[cameron]

Andy,Very nice job here, for sure. You should do well with this. I hesitate to say that the melody in the verses sounds a little familiar, but I can't think of the song it sounds like, so until I do.... SAFE!!It would be nice to see the lyrics, as I'm a lousy listener.Guitar distortion is a bit distracting. That's about the only thing I find wrong. It's a really good country pop song. Well done!!Cam