New Song -- Your critiques please!
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Re: New Song -- Your critiques please!
Good country song there, Andy.verses sounds a little familiar, but I can't think of the song it sounds like, so until I do.... SAFE!!Tracy Lawrence song melody maybe?I agree from above that the title was repeated ju st a tad too much for my taste, but who am I? Tweak it and It'll be there.Dale
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EXCELLENT smooth country song!Vocals are AWESOME!The hook is THERE, dude!My only thought is to make the music a tad bit more forceful in your choruses. You want your choruses to reach out and GRBA the listener AND NOT LET GO!!!
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Thanks to all! ANYMORE CRITIQUES OUT THERE??? DON'T BE SHY!!Andy
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Excellent job! It sounds like something I hear on the radio. Catchy chorus. I think it's great the way it us, if anything, maybe build the last chorus a bit more and don't fade it out? Great job! J
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I'm not a country person so I'll refrain from trying to add value here, but IMO that's an impressive song.I can definitely picture that in a movie.Well done.
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hey putter!!i'm with misty on this one, a perfect blend of those 3--and because of that, i think it has an excellent shot at actually being forwarded and jumping over that "high bar" thing taxi believes in....it is splendid all the way around--the ONLY thing if i'm to pick it out, is that it seemed just a tad too long for radio play, but i may be dead wrong..again, just friggin splendid--and yes, it does sound familiar--like about 80% of the tunes on c/w radio today!! and that IMHO my friend, is NOT a bad thing...just the way it is...all the best,warren
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Really Nice!! Lyrics are there!! Acoustic solo may need some fattening up in the eq - it sounds a bit thin on this end - and maybe needs a tiny bit more reverb. Distortion on elec is a bit distracting as stated above. So much good about this tune!!Kitz
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Thanks all! ANY MORE??
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Sounds good, Andy. Jason did a great job and Ron is always top notch. Good luck with it.Claire
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Sounds really good to me, good song & good production. One nit . . . electric guitar (right channel) should come up to it's "after the solo level" imo. but you know what? It wouldn't really matter if it didn't cause it's still good.
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