New tune- going to a demo studio- STUDIO VERSION UPLOADED!

[Robtoons]

The full band demo studio production is now on my Taxi page :That's Gonna Leave A Mark
What do you all think? (I'm pretty stoked!)

Hi all,
I wanted to find out what happens when you have all the work done by somebody else!
I sent this tune to a demo studio in Nashville to give it a go. I'm dipping into the country end of the pool again
for some reason, this song came at me and I couldn't ignore it.
I talked to the studio owner and asked if he had a vocalist that would fit this and he did, but recommended I sing it myself.
What do y'all think about that- I thought having an authentic country twanger would make it an easier artist pitch,
but he said not so much...

He's going to start work tomorrow- I'll post the progress, this should be highly educational!
Please feel free to comment on the song and the lyrics too.
Thanks! -Rob

https://soundcloud.com/robtoons/gonna-l ... -live-demo


That's Gonna Leave A Mark c. Robert Carroll 8/30/12
V1:
I remember the first day in our new house
All we could do was laugh
When I dropped that chair from the top of the stairs
And it broke it right in half

"That's gonna leave a mark" you said
And sure enough it was true
After all these years the marks still here
But that's more than I can say for you

Pre:
Now I'm reading your note in the kitchen
Hear the wind in the old oak tree
One hell of a way after all these years
To find out you're leaving me

Chorus:
That's gonna leave a mark
That's gonna leave a bruise
Like the ones I got as a kid
When daddy started hitting the booze
That's gonna leave a mark
One that you can't see
And now God only knows the mark you're leaving on me

Bridge:
In my dreams I am falling
And I'm calling out your name
Like that old chair
Tumbling down the stairs
Some things will never be the same

V2:
I should have known better before this
When something just don't feel right
When I drove two hours to fix your car
You were driving late at night

I know I could have treated you better
Spent a little less time at the bar
But would it have made any difference
To where you went that night in your car?

[mikeymike2000]

hey Rob,

I like that you are sharing this with us (an totally want to hear the progress) but I really don't think you need to go that rout at all. You have a great voice, play guitar awesomely and nobody will have the emotion you have.

The only exception I can think of is if you wanted live instruments in there but a good live recorded drum loop and authentic sounding bass VST (if you don't have a real one) is about all you need.

What is this person gonna do for you? And for how much?

I say save your money or put the same cash into something you can use over and over.

BTW, Another great tune!

PS I was listening to "There from Here" the other night and it hit the spot for me in the mood I was in. So, thanks for writing that one.

[eeoo]

Hey Rob - This will be fun to hear this one progressing! Nice tune man, I was expecting the chorus to go big but then the second time I knew what was coming and it seemed more natural, might be worth a try to make the chorus soar a bit more though. The other surprise was the bridge being before the second verse, have you tried going VCVCBC instead? Just a thought...

Very cool Rob, thanks for sharing!

eo

[marcblack30]

Rob, man this is really great, I can see why he recommended you sing it yourself, you sound great! The demo is really clean, well done!
I felt the same as Ethan when it came to the chorus, was expecting it to really soar.

Looking forward to hearing the finished goods.

Marc

[michael11]

Exceptional song Rob!

I can see why the studio want you to sing it,the vocal is kind of conversational in it’s delivery and almost understates a very powerful lyric but the overall effect to my ears makes the message even more poignant.
The only voice that I can think of that would do this justice,other than your voice,is Kenny Chesney.

Great work.

Very moving.


Mick.

[slowdance]

Rob,

Agree w/ Marc sounds "clean" and warm....what mic did you use on vox?....good luck w/ the demo.

Regards,
Dick

[feaker66]

Wow Rob

They don't get much better than this.

I don't know so much if there is a better singer for this??

Really heartfelt and a great story.

Congrats

sincerely

Paul

[theoldman]

Hi Rob--

Outstanding track. I loved the vocals and the guitar work was great.

Oh, yea, very well written song!

Good luck,
JT

[Robtoons]

Thanks for the listen you guys!

Mike: Thanks so much for the kind words! I'm really taking this to a studio just to see what the process is like- I've done so many
productions of my stuff in an insular way using only my limited skill set in the studio, though my skills are growing, I still am
curious what a pro will do with this and how it will differ from what I can do. It's going to be a "full band "production (w/live drums woo hoo!)
and all he has to go on is the demo. I don't feel bad about blowing a little $ for something that will be very educational.
(plus he's unbelievably cheap!)

Ethan and Mark: Yeah good call on the traffic, it's funny I never thought about it- this was one of those tunes that kind of
wrote itself, and it just seemed to flow with the changes in that order. I was throttling the chorus back a bit because the
bridge felt like the climax. We'll see what kind of build the studio puts in there. Thanks for the feedback!

Mick: Thank you! I'll let Kenny Chesney have it for the asking!

Thanks Dick- I used my trusty AT 4047 on the vox and an AT 4021 scd on the guit I've discovered that standing up
facing a dead surface (really close) gets you pretty good isolation of the two mics.

Thanks Paul! The story in this has some basis in reality; this happened to a friend of mine many years ago -his girlfriend actually
called him up in the middle of the night and had him drive 2 hours to fix her car as she was on her way to go meet up with another guy. Ouch!

Thanks JT and good to meet you!

I'm stoked to know that someone is tracking this today! I'll post it up when i get something.
Thanks for all the support and encouragement on this everyone, you guys are awesome!
-Rob

[crazyhooks]

Hey Rob your voice is great on this , cool baritone tone has not been heard in a long time
And the arrangement flows, yes as a proper edit you could get the first line in hook soaring
I like your chorus because you drop to lower register with the lyric title kind of " Gordon light foot "
I would send them your vocal you did here and mix it with their
Production .

Good work
J.