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[Casey H]

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[billg]

Good job guys! I think some of the phrasing in a couple of places could be "less forced" but nothing other than that -

[jchitty]

Man, I love "One More Night" in the finished stage! I've heard the very rough demo, so I can see how it's progressed. The only suggestion I'd have is to turn the vocals up a bit.....but otherwise, very good job, Case.BTW, I didn't write those lyrics, but thanks for the mention.

[Casey H]

Quote:Man, I love "One More Night" in the finished stage! I've heard the very rough demo, so I can see how it's progressed. The only suggestion I'd have is to turn the vocals up a bit.....but otherwise, very good job, Case.BTW, I didn't write those lyrics, but thanks for the mention. Hey ChitsYou didn't write the lyrics , but I recall bouncing ideas off you and other friends from here. So, you helped and I appreciate that...Thanks Bill and Chits... And this is a rough demo- we can work on vocal level and phrasing as we progress to a final version. Casey

[hummingbird]

I think this is awesome. The Punk-style gives the song life & quirkiness, and with a little tidy up, I can think of lots of listings this would be good for. Good job, you two!!!... I respectfully disagree that vocals should come up much more in the mix. This is will be a film/tv pitch, I believe, and in that case, the vocals need to sit pretty much at the same level as the instruments, and this sounds right to me.

[elser]

I felt like dancing in front of my computer with my hands in the air. Right on! I love it.

[jchitty]

Quote:I think this is awesome. The Punk-style gives the song life & quirkiness, and with a little tidy up, I can think of lots of listings this would be good for. Good job, you two!!!... I respectfully disagree that vocals should come up much more in the mix. This is will be a film/tv pitch, I believe, and in that case, the vocals need to sit pretty much at the same level as the instruments, and this sounds right to me.It could just be my speakers, Vikki. Maybe that's why the vocals may have been off to me. We both do agree that this is an awesome song!

[Casey H]

Quote:I felt like dancing in front of my computer with my hands in the air. Right on! I love it.Thanks Vikki et al... Elser: Wow! Not that's a complement!! Thanks!! And, again mega-thanks to Keith (B-Flat)... If this is his ROUGH demo... BTW, One idea I have for a mid-section of the song is drums with clapping to the phrase "one more night, one more night in NYC" like at a concert. Casey

[deantaylor]

Casey,I really like the lyric, but the melody just didn't do it for me. I thought it seemed too repetitive and the chorus hook did not grab me. Not a bad listen, the performance is good, there is a lot of energy, but not original enough in the melody area for my ears ... Well, the good thing is everyone disagrees with me. They all like it a lot. Must be my problem.Dean

[Casey H]

No worries Dean, thanks for the listen and feedback... There's no point in posting if you don't get people's honest reactions. I do think the chorus differentiation could be a touch better and something to think about for the final. Casey