People

[irwin]

This is my new song production up for Critique, it is entitled "People" (style) pop/dance
https://www.boomplay.com/songs/137078710?from=artists

Hi Irwin

The same comments I made on pretty much each of your songs over the past 5(?) years apply again.

Best wishes,
Tom

Thanks for the listen Tom, is it the chords again/this time around?.

[irwin]

...going for an eclectic, avante garde, indie-garage type track...

That's my new story and I'm sticking to it!!

Sorry Irwin, this track is too far from commercially viable to comment on. Others can be more specific. Wish you the best.

Casey

I appreciate you taking some time to leave a comment Casey, But you must admit I did better on this song then the last song I'd posted here. And if you don't think so that's okay, but I hope you do.

Irwin

[irwin]

hmmm . . . it is very interesting

imo if you are going for an eclectic, avante garde, indie-garage type track this would definitely fit that outsiderish sub-genre....

but since you mentioned dance/Pop, you may need to re-evaluate this track from the ground up, begin by researching current dance/pop tracks

I will be looking into (eclectic, avante garde, indie-garage type tracks)

You took the time to listen/reply advice in a comment to my post and I thank you very much for that. Please feel free to comment on any other post that I may post here. You see things that I didn't see.

Irwin